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for keeping an eye on things -> for keeping a close eye on things (veiller au grain: look out for squalls/be on one's guard)
for keeping an eye on things -> for keeping such a close eye on things (veiller au grain: look out for squalls/be on one's guard, so has a stronger, protective implication I think)


neutral stocks - I usually translate "valeurs" as shares and "actions/stocks" as stocks for consistency. But I think the terms are pretty interchangeable and stocks probably fits better here.
neutral stocks - I usually translate "valeurs" as shares and "actions/stocks" as stocks for consistency. But I think the terms are pretty interchangeable and stocks probably fits better here.

Revision as of 06:48, 3 October 2023

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for keeping an eye on things -> for keeping such a close eye on things (veiller au grain: look out for squalls/be on one's guard, so has a stronger, protective implication I think)

neutral stocks - I usually translate "valeurs" as shares and "actions/stocks" as stocks for consistency. But I think the terms are pretty interchangeable and stocks probably fits better here.

I will remind you, which -> I will remind you of something that?

flamboyant characters -> fiery letters?

between your most striking memories -> among your keenest memories?

stocks (x2) - see above

the sale of which has to reimburse -> the sale of which must be sufficient to reimburse?

except the aforementioned - excluding the aforementioned?

handover -> hand over

Egyptian stocks -> Egyptian securites ("titres" - to differentiate from "valeurs")

for no longer paying -> so as not to pay