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23 September 2022

  • curprev 11:1611:16, 23 September 2022‎ Yorktaylors talk contribs‎ 452 bytes +452‎ Created page with "Suggestions... "physical and spiritual pain" -> "physical and mental pain"? "I make many wishes for you, that" sounds a bit clunky. Voeux could be prayers or hopes. Maybe something less literal such as "you are much in my thoughts/prayers"? You could replace the "that" with "and"? "carrying the same natural beauties" maybe "laden with..." or "bearing the same..."? "a very Romanian “horresco”" -> ""horresco" is very Romanian"? (Yorktaylors)"
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