Talk:CP 03065/en
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Suggestions...
"physical and spiritual pain" -> "physical and mental pain"?
- Change made (Nstrole)
"I make many wishes for you, that" sounds a bit clunky. Voeux could be prayers or hopes. Maybe something less literal such as "you are much in my thoughts/prayers"? You could replace the "that" with "and"?
- Change made (Nstrole)
"carrying the same natural beauties" maybe "laden with..." or "bearing the same..."?
- Change made (Nstrole)
"a very Romanian “horresco”" -> ""horresco" is very Romanian"?
- Change made (Nstrole)
(Yorktaylors)