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telegraphed me pleading -> telegraphed begging me | telegraphed me pleading -> telegraphed begging me (I think pleading is too strong) | ||
captain -> commanding officer (see note 4, médecin-major à quatre galons = médecin-major 1e classe = Commandant not capitaine) | captain -> commanding officer (see note 4, médecin-major à quatre galons = médecin-major 1e classe = Commandant not capitaine) | ||
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and as you gave me the great pleasure of being a friend of -> and because for me you have the great prestige of being a friend of | and as you gave me the great pleasure of being a friend of -> and because for me you have the great prestige of being a friend of | ||
portraits -> images (one of the "effigies" is Pozzi's actual face so portrait didn't seem appropriate) | |||
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Revision as of 10:47, 1 October 2021
telegraphed me pleading -> telegraphed begging me (I think pleading is too strong)
captain -> commanding officer (see note 4, médecin-major à quatre galons = médecin-major 1e classe = Commandant not capitaine)
telegramme -> telegram
I know that you are also fond -> I know that you too are very fond
and as you gave me the great pleasure of being a friend of -> and because for me you have the great prestige of being a friend of
portraits -> images (one of the "effigies" is Pozzi's actual face so portrait didn't seem appropriate)
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