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"When have I since had so many useful things to write to you" -> "When for so long I have had some very helpful things to write to you"? | "When have I since had so many useful things to write to you" -> "When for so long I have had some very helpful things to write to you"? | ||
*Change made (Nstrole) | |||
"brochure" -> "booklet" - see note 3, not a brochure but a booklet of Proust's article. | "brochure" -> "booklet" - see note 3, not a brochure but a booklet of Proust's article. | ||
*Change made (Nstrole) | |||
"I am not resigned to" -> "and still not resigned to"? | "I am not resigned to" -> "and still not resigned to"? | ||
*Change made (Nstrole) | |||
"vanity still larger" -> "is an even greater vanity"? | "vanity still larger" -> "is an even greater vanity"? | ||
*Change made (Nstrole) | |||
"The certain excuse of this" -> "The positive excuse for this"? | "The certain excuse of this" -> "The positive excuse for this"? | ||
*Change made (Nstrole) | |||
"I do not doubt that it is not absurd" -> "I've no doubt that it is absurd"? | "I do not doubt that it is not absurd" -> "I've no doubt that it is absurd"? | ||
*We believed that "I do not doubt" matched the style of the original (Nstrole) | |||
"there is also only absurdities to be noted in the manifesto within Le Figaro" -> "how many other absurdities I could point out in the Figaro manifesto"? | "there is also only absurdities to be noted in the manifesto within Le Figaro" -> "how many other absurdities I could point out in the Figaro manifesto"? | ||
"No fair mind will contest that one loses their universal value in denationalising it, and that even at the height of singularity, generality blossoms." -> "No fair minded person would deny that by denationalising a work one makes it lose its value, and that it is at the very height of the particular that the general blossoms. | *Change made (Nstrole) | ||
"No fair mind will contest that one loses their universal value in denationalising it, and that even at the height of singularity, generality blossoms." -> "No fair minded person would deny that by denationalising a work one makes it lose its value, and that it is at the very height of the particular that the general blossoms.? | |||
*Change made (Nstrole) | |||
"to a body of work whilst seeking" -> "from a body of work by seeking"? | "to a body of work whilst seeking" -> "from a body of work by seeking"? | ||
*Change made (Nstrole) | |||
"presiding" -> "presiding over"? | "presiding" -> "presiding over"? | ||
*Change made (Nstrole) | |||
"this unique concept which is a law" -> "this unique correspondence which is what a law is"? | "this unique concept which is a law" -> "this unique correspondence which is what a law is"? | ||
*Change made (Nstrole) | |||
"it is the guardianship of the progress of the human spirit" -> "it has been the guardianship of the progress of the human spirit" | "it is the guardianship of the progress of the human spirit" -> "it has been the guardianship of the progress of the human spirit" | ||
*Change made (Nstrole) | |||
"the French Justice" -> "French Justice" | "the French Justice" -> "French Justice" | ||
*Change made (Nstrole) | |||
"soldats de l'Esprit" -> "Defenders of the Faith"? | "soldats de l'Esprit" -> "Defenders of the Faith"? | ||
*Change made (Nstrole) | |||
"wanting to be an all French force" -> "wanting to be French at all costs"? | "wanting to be an all French force" -> "wanting to be French at all costs"? | ||
*Change made (Nstrole) | |||
"you took a German tone" -> "you have adopted a Germanic tone"? | "you took a German tone" -> "you have adopted a Germanic tone"? | ||
*Change made (Nstrole) | |||
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Revision as of 17:56, 2 October 2022
Suggestions...
"When have I since had so many useful things to write to you" -> "When for so long I have had some very helpful things to write to you"?
- Change made (Nstrole)
"brochure" -> "booklet" - see note 3, not a brochure but a booklet of Proust's article.
- Change made (Nstrole)
"I am not resigned to" -> "and still not resigned to"?
- Change made (Nstrole)
"vanity still larger" -> "is an even greater vanity"?
- Change made (Nstrole)
"The certain excuse of this" -> "The positive excuse for this"?
- Change made (Nstrole)
"I do not doubt that it is not absurd" -> "I've no doubt that it is absurd"?
- We believed that "I do not doubt" matched the style of the original (Nstrole)
"there is also only absurdities to be noted in the manifesto within Le Figaro" -> "how many other absurdities I could point out in the Figaro manifesto"?
- Change made (Nstrole)
"No fair mind will contest that one loses their universal value in denationalising it, and that even at the height of singularity, generality blossoms." -> "No fair minded person would deny that by denationalising a work one makes it lose its value, and that it is at the very height of the particular that the general blossoms.?
- Change made (Nstrole)
"to a body of work whilst seeking" -> "from a body of work by seeking"?
- Change made (Nstrole)
"presiding" -> "presiding over"?
- Change made (Nstrole)
"this unique concept which is a law" -> "this unique correspondence which is what a law is"?
- Change made (Nstrole)
"it is the guardianship of the progress of the human spirit" -> "it has been the guardianship of the progress of the human spirit"
- Change made (Nstrole)
"the French Justice" -> "French Justice"
- Change made (Nstrole)
"soldats de l'Esprit" -> "Defenders of the Faith"?
- Change made (Nstrole)
"wanting to be an all French force" -> "wanting to be French at all costs"?
- Change made (Nstrole)
"you took a German tone" -> "you have adopted a Germanic tone"?
- Change made (Nstrole)
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