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Yorktaylors (talk | contribs) (Created page with "Suggestions... "administrator of the North" - this refers to the railway company Chemins de fer du Nord so I wouldn't translate the name of the company. Director is probably better than administrator so "director of the Nord"? "those which were intended for you" should be singular not plural. "this one which was intended for you" (Could he have enclosed the other letter with this one maybe?) "Thousands of affectionate and grateful memories" something less literal woul...") |
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"administrator of the North" - this refers to the railway company Chemins de fer du Nord so I wouldn't translate the name of the company. Director is probably better than administrator so "director of the Nord"? | "administrator of the North" - this refers to the railway company Chemins de fer du Nord so I wouldn't translate the name of the company. Director is probably better than administrator so "director of the Nord"? | ||
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"those which were intended for you" should be singular not plural. "this one which was intended for you" (Could he have enclosed the other letter with this one maybe?) | "those which were intended for you" should be singular not plural. "this one which was intended for you" (Could he have enclosed the other letter with this one maybe?) | ||
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"Thousands of affectionate and grateful memories" something less literal would be better, eg "With my most grateful best wishes". | "Thousands of affectionate and grateful memories" something less literal would be better, eg "With my most grateful best wishes". | ||
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Latest revision as of 17:13, 2 October 2022
Suggestions...
"administrator of the North" - this refers to the railway company Chemins de fer du Nord so I wouldn't translate the name of the company. Director is probably better than administrator so "director of the Nord"?
- Change made (Nstrole)
"those which were intended for you" should be singular not plural. "this one which was intended for you" (Could he have enclosed the other letter with this one maybe?)
- Change made (Nstrole)
"Thousands of affectionate and grateful memories" something less literal would be better, eg "With my most grateful best wishes".
- Change made (Nstrole)
(Yorktaylors)