Talk:CP 02843/en

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Reviewed by Moderator 11.02.22.

Minor suggestions for consideration:

"same platitudes return" - "the same platitudes are repeated"?

"a decent line written on war" - "a decent line written about the war"? (I'm sure he's referring to that particular war rather than to war in general).

[Yorktaylors]

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