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prepare victories -> making ready for victories | prepare victories -> making ready for victories | ||
wait for you not even the "brevitas" but the "silentium" of the general - expect from you not merely the general's "brevitas" but his "silentium" | wait for you not even the "brevitas" but the "silentium" of the general -> expect from you not merely the general's "brevitas" but his "silentium" | ||
be in a [fit] state | be in a [fit] state |
Latest revision as of 20:08, 6 July 2022
a diminishment of gratitude -> any weakening of a gratitude
that grows [stronger]
Already confused -> Already embarrassed
my recommendations -> my entreaties
prepare victories -> making ready for victories
wait for you not even the "brevitas" but the "silentium" of the general -> expect from you not merely the general's "brevitas" but his "silentium"
be in a [fit] state
I could have believed -> I could have imagined
it is too soon for me to ask you of this -> it will be soon enough for what I have to ask you
but not too soon -> but not soon enough
that they have admiration for all that he has done -> that he has earned the admiration of all
who says courage (they had even written "heroism") says danger faced -> when they say courage (they even wrote "heroism") they mean danger faced
possible invasion of Verdun is not to reduce my anxiety -> possible besieging of Verdun does nothing to lessen my anxiety
But there is already too much to speak about -> But it is already too much to talk about it
since there is not at this moment a Frenchman -> since right now there is not a single Frenchman
fear for dear lives and to be proud of lives offered in sacrifice -> fear for the lives of his dear ones and take pride in the lives offered in sacrifice
[my] dear sir
it is natural to ask you to allow me (thus you will provide me double the service without which I would not dare ask) to come as a patient -> it is of course as a patient that you allow me to come to you (thus you will be doing me a double service without which I would not dare ask)
and that will leave it purer than doubts -> and that leaves things clear of any scruples I might feel
beautiful methods -> noble methods
one can resolve such contradictions -> such contradictions may be resolved
you who have so much opposed then unified -> you who have so well set apart then reconciled
the offering of my feelings of great respect and gratitude -> my most respectful and grateful regards
(Yorktaylors)
Punctuation inside quotation marks
Moved punctuation inside quotation marks to follow the style guide at the bottom of the Guidelines for Contributors:
"Place punctuation inside of quotations marks.
- Example: “example.” / “example,” (versus in French: « exemple », / « exemple ».)"
(Nstrole)