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prepare victories -> making ready for victories
prepare victories -> making ready for victories


wait for you not even the "brevitas" but the "silentium" of the general - expect from you not merely the general's "brevitas" but his "silentium"
wait for you not even the "brevitas" but the "silentium" of the general -> expect from you not merely the general's "brevitas" but his "silentium"


be in a [fit] state
be in a [fit] state

Latest revision as of 20:08, 6 July 2022

a diminishment of gratitude -> any weakening of a gratitude

that grows [stronger]

Already confused -> Already embarrassed

my recommendations -> my entreaties

prepare victories -> making ready for victories

wait for you not even the "brevitas" but the "silentium" of the general -> expect from you not merely the general's "brevitas" but his "silentium"

be in a [fit] state

I could have believed -> I could have imagined

it is too soon for me to ask you of this -> it will be soon enough for what I have to ask you

but not too soon -> but not soon enough

that they have admiration for all that he has done -> that he has earned the admiration of all

who says courage (they had even written "heroism") says danger faced -> when they say courage (they even wrote "heroism") they mean danger faced

possible invasion of Verdun is not to reduce my anxiety -> possible besieging of Verdun does nothing to lessen my anxiety

But there is already too much to speak about -> But it is already too much to talk about it

since there is not at this moment a Frenchman -> since right now there is not a single Frenchman

fear for dear lives and to be proud of lives offered in sacrifice -> fear for the lives of his dear ones and take pride in the lives offered in sacrifice

[my] dear sir

it is natural to ask you to allow me (thus you will provide me double the service without which I would not dare ask) to come as a patient -> it is of course as a patient that you allow me to come to you (thus you will be doing me a double service without which I would not dare ask)

and that will leave it purer than doubts -> and that leaves things clear of any scruples I might feel

beautiful methods -> noble methods

one can resolve such contradictions -> such contradictions may be resolved

you who have so much opposed then unified -> you who have so well set apart then reconciled

the offering of my feelings of great respect and gratitude -> my most respectful and grateful regards

(Yorktaylors)

Punctuation inside quotation marks

Moved punctuation inside quotation marks to follow the style guide at the bottom of the Guidelines for Contributors:

"Place punctuation inside of quotations marks.

  • Example: “example.” / “example,” (versus in French: « exemple », / « exemple ».)"

(Nstrole)