Talk:CP 03065/en

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Suggestions...

"physical and spiritual pain" -> "physical and mental pain"?

"I make many wishes for you, that" sounds a bit clunky. Voeux could be prayers or hopes. Maybe something less literal such as "you are much in my thoughts/prayers"? You could replace the "that" with "and"?

"carrying the same natural beauties" maybe "laden with..." or "bearing the same..."?

"a very Romanian “horresco”" -> ""horresco" is very Romanian"?

(Yorktaylors)

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