Talk:CP 02924/en: Revision history

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2 October 2022

24 September 2022

  • curprev 05:2605:26, 24 September 2022Yorktaylors talk contribs 835 bytes +835 Created page with "Suggestions... "little Bénac" etc. -> suggest "young Bénac" etc.? Does little sound a bit patronizing and inappropriate? "I learned in the latest news" -> maybe stick to the literal "I learned in the last hour"? "so full of value" -> "so full of bravery"? "he wholly decided to commit and go to the trenches" -> "he insisted upon enlisting and going into the trenches" "But the fortune is worth nothing" -> "But money is meaningless"? "You must remind yourself that w..."